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Overall, it can be clearly seen that the percentage of obese people grew in all four countries over the entire period, although there was a higher increase between 1990 and 2000 than the previous decade. However, while obesity levels in America and Britain grew significantly, those in Sweden and Japan rose only slightly, with the US having the highest proportion and Japan the lowest.

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